Ten tens

                          

I loathe syllable-counting poetry
The stresses are all in the wrong places
to make any sense of pentameter,
tetrameter,  of iambs or dactyls.
Rhythm counts for nothing  in a haiku.
Fibonacci poetry I deplore.
These ancient Japanese forms have a lot
to answer for.   I digress –  forgive me.
Prose poems  in English must have a lilt,
pull the mind along to follow the thought.

I’ve been too busy to write this week, and I thought you might think I’d died or something, so a post wouldn’t come amiss. This is a form called “The Big 10,”  from an old Poetic Asides prompt – with amazingly simple rules: 

  • The poem has to have 10 lines (no more and no fewer).
  • Each line has to contain 10 syllables (again, exactly 10).

And that’s it!

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7 Responses to Ten tens

  1. I’ve done the 10×10 exactly once. Nine to go, and then I get to die, I guess!

    Congrats on using a form to decry form-related poetry. The irony is so sweet, Viv. Peace, Amy

  2. How apropos to write a poem about despising syllable counting in a syllabic form of poetry!! Good to see you, Viv!

  3. I love how you tackle forms you despise :)

  4. Misky says:

    Glad that you and your muse are both alive and kicking syllables!

  5. Pseu says:

    I’m useless at counting beats and syllables – I’m very impressed.

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