Doubt
Doubts come to confound
the truth with muddled logic
and refuse to leave
*
Undoubtedly Spring,
then unseasonable snow
covered the blossom
*
There may be no plums
no bees have yet visited
delicious blossom.
http://haiku-heights.blogspot.fr/2012/04/april-heights-day-4-116-doubt.html
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http://haiku-heights.blogspot.fr/2012/04/april-heights-day-4-116-doubt.html
If the plums don’t come, then seize and devour the blossom!
Cactus Did Not Doubt
Lovely, Viv. I especially like the second one. That is so New England, especially this year.
I like the simplicity of this one. It happens so frequently in Reno. One year is never like another it seems. Unpredictable.
The first one is my favorite, Viv. Maybe because it feels like an old friend.
These haiku are beautiful – the middle one is my favourite . Thank you.
Wonderful. The first one is my favorite.
The middle one is my favourite because it so perfectly describes what’s happening.