HAIKU CHALLENGE 27

Posted on February 26, 2012 by

 

A long time ago
the unthinkable happened.
Please, never  again.

 

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/2012/01/haiku-challenge-is-back.html

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7 Responses to HAIKU CHALLENGE 27

  1. zongrik says:
    February 29, 2012 at 02:06

    last line is perfect

    Reply
  2. Vidya Sury says:
    February 27, 2012 at 18:24

    So to the point, it is scary! Very well written, Viv!

    Reply
  3. sonsy lass says:
    February 27, 2012 at 11:46

    Deceptively simple, succinct, subtle – pefect, Viv!

    Reply
  4. Tilly Bud says:
    February 27, 2012 at 11:38

    Sometimes, less really is more. Excellent.

    Reply
  5. Harry Nicholson says:
    February 26, 2012 at 23:05

    Stark – but the dark gate
    Stands open today – unless
    It is for yet more

    Reply

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