haiku challenge 22

Paint the Image

Legs twirl, toes spring up
joyful dance of grace, beauty -
her youth gives delight.

http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/2012/02/haiku-challenge-2012-29-days-29-haiku_22.html

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9 Responses to haiku challenge 22

  1. cloakedmonk says:

    Very succinctly descriptive. Really nice.

  2. Grace says:

    It does indeed ~

    Very nice ~

  3. becca givens says:

    I can see her now!! Nicely done, Viv!
    Here is my Day 22.

  4. Nice one Viv. As Mama Zen says already … the last line … wow

  5. I too love the last line….lovely haiku

  6. zongrik says:

    you say all the essential about dance in that haiku!!

    three dancer senryu

  7. Ellecee says:

    I like this a lot. Thank you

  8. Mama Zen says:

    I love that last line.

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