Haiku Challenge 10

Posted on February 10, 2012 by

A day to remember

The transformation
of girl to mature adult -
her first child is born.

http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/2012/01/haiku-challenge-is-back.html

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8 Responses to Haiku Challenge 10

  1. otterblossom says:
    February 15, 2012 at 19:37

    does make you grow up in a hurry

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  2. Tilly Bud says:
    February 12, 2012 at 12:17

    Great moment in a girl’s life; terrifying in her mother’s. Good one.

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  3. Someone is Special says:
    February 10, 2012 at 23:52

    that’s special Viv..

    Someone is Special

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  4. markwindham says:
    February 10, 2012 at 22:07

    Nothing matures faster — and a wonderful day.

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  5. Amber says:
    February 10, 2012 at 19:23

    Yeah, very nice! :) <3

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  6. Valli says:
    February 10, 2012 at 16:35

    Thoughtful…loved it :)

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  7. Asni says:
    February 10, 2012 at 15:09

    I can relate to this. Lovely haiku!

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  8. Chevrefeuille says:
    February 10, 2012 at 13:05

    This really is “a special day” viv. The transformation from child to adult … not always easy. I remember that I had some problems to find myself.

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